With the increasing use and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
There is no exaggeration to say that technology has caught on among people worldwide due to its advancement. In fact, a plethora of equipment have ability to do the work which people used to do. In this essay, I will discuss the benefits and downsides of this tendency.
On the one hand, it is clear that the replacement of technology provides people with a myriad of advantages. To begin with, that machines do all tasks for people will probably lead to a reduction of the proportion of work people have to take over. As a result, they are likely to have more free time with their families or even for enjoying themselves, and therefore, more happiness will result in better health. In addition, thanks to new technology, work productivity must show a pronounced increase.Take it for example, in big companies, when all steps are taken by machines, work can last all day and the figure for products manufactured will be obviously twice or three times as much as before ever.
On the other hand, this argument can be considered from an opposite angle. The support of new technology is believed to have associated unemployment costs. In other words, machines get involved in manufacturing process and factories can make a healthier profit, it is of no necessity for them to take in employees. People seem to suffer from lack of jobs from which poverty stems.Not only do advanced machines affect directly people's careers but they also make them come closer to laziness or irresponsibility. they have a tendency to depend completely on technology and bear no weight of how work is going that they only indulge in their hobbies such as watching TV, eating street food, etc. Consequently, it is evident that this trend causes a variety of health diseases like obesity or short-sighted eyes.
In conclusion, it is not absurd to argue that new technology replacing people has its own advantages and disadvantages if people use advanced machines rightly, their perks further outweigh their drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93471810089 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90587943373 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581602373887 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8953602334 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.785714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258470453445 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849550018684 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729194699106 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166244290485 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439150154393 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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