Many women want or need to continue working even after they have children. The charts below show the working patterns of mothers with young children to care for.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In a world with growing expenditure, it is no surprise that most mothers are reluctant to forgo their employment for childcare. The given chart provides an analysis of working mothers in terms of the age of their youngest.
Comparing the four pie charts depicted above, it cannot be denied that the portion of non working mothers had been decreasing significantly with the growing age of their youngest child. Staring from 70 percent in infant stages, it has descended to 26 percent with the child reaching an age of 10.
Additionally, the number of mothers participating in full-time employment has remained constant at 11 percent with their toddler aging from 0-4 years. However, this consistency was not maintained once the child is past the age of 4. It increased to 14 percent when the youngest is between 5-9 years and reached a maximum of 29 percent as the age of the child crossed 10 years.
Furthermore, the section of part time workers who are mothers had also adopted a growing trend. From occupying one-fifth of the chart while the new born is aged 0-2 years, it has increased significantly to occupy half of the chart when the child is around 10 years. Though, it reached its peak with 48 percent when the age of their children is confined between 5-9 years.
Thus, the disposition of women with children to work is directly proportional to the age of their dependent children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96788990826 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79389431932 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55504587156 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5235974289 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.3 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13332522924 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632537460505 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688758819478 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100147990699 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074041004271 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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