the maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it now and plans for its developments
The maps below, both together demonstrate the topical appearance of a small town called Islip and plans for its development in the future. As it can be observed Islip has only basic facilities, namely, shops, main road, park and school.
To begin with, there are more facilities and infrastructure planed for the city. Dual carriageway which is surround city except school and eliminate countryside. Apart from this, bus station and car park will be constructed in the north side of the city, next to the shopping center.
Based on the second maps, in the future many infrastructure must be build in the city. Along with this, main road replaced by place for pedestrians only in the center of the town where surrounded by shops in both sides. Also, it should be noted that housing is no longer limited to the south side of the city, there are predicted new housing for the east side of town, next to the car park and in the corner of walking street. Plus, area of park will be decreased and become place for new housing.
To narrow it down, topical town look like small village whereas its future design turns it to the modern city.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'surrounded'.
Suggestion: surrounded
...for the city. Dual carriageway which is surround city except school and eliminate countr...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun infrastructure seems to be countable; consider using: 'many infrastructures'.
Suggestion: many infrastructures
...Based on the second maps, in the future many infrastructure must be build in the city. Along with t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, second, so, whereas, apart from, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69651741294 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43038772329 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3536178215 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260026489096 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100079724038 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15023319122 0.0843802449381 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166687185654 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134659307388 0.0819641961636 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.