online sales for electronics & appliance, food and beverage, home furnishings and video game in Canada from the year 2005 and 2010.
The given pie chart represent the online sales for electronics & appliance, food and beverage, home furnishings and video game in Canada from the year 2005 and 2010.
It can be seen that the consumption of food and beverage with video games has increased with time where as the necessary items in daily life like electronics and appliance, home furnishings is been used in less number.
Over the years the sales of the video games and food and beverage has sky rocketed with the percentage of 5% and 10% respectively. It's see that people are more investing money in fun and in relaxing.
On the other hand the online sales of the electronics & appliance is decline with the 5% from the year 2005 and 2010 while the online sales of the home furnishings is reduce by two times of electronic & appliance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ith video games has increased with time where as the necessary items in daily life like ...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less numb'?
Suggestion: less numb
...iance, home furnishings is been used in less number. Over the years the sales of the vid...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...online sales of the home furnishings is reduce by two times of electronic & appliance....
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...two times of electronic & appliance.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81428571429 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62938922773 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7759804934 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.8 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.617290089797 0.215688989381 286% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.322009401842 0.103423049105 311% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.26453830597 0.0843802449381 314% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.389920410846 0.15604864568 250% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.246031857296 0.0819641961636 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.