The pictures show how tea is produced They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea

Essay topics:

The pictures show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea.

The pictures give information on the production of tea and how people can make a cup of tea from instant tea bags.

Overall, there is a total of 18 stages revolving around making tea, starting with growing seeds in countries that have tea-centric industries, and ending with consumers having a sip of hot tea.

As per the diagram, India and China are where tea is grown the most. To be more specific about the process, to start off with, farmers sow tea seeds on paddle fields in those aforementioned countries. With the help of sunlight, plants can be precipitated to grow. When they reach preferable height, farmers will pick the leaves of those plants and put them in baskets. Then those chosen leaves will be gathered and spread out under the sun so that they can dry out. After that stage, workers will pack those into boxes and load them onto lorries. Subsequently, these drivers will make sure the products be shipped to supermarkets. After being arranged neatly on the shelves, those nicely-packaged tea packs will then be chosen by customers.

After buying the tea, at home, customers may want to try out their newly-bought tea. They will prepare some water from the fountain to fill their kettle. They, under the heat of high temperature, water will be boiled. While waiting for the kettle to finish its water-boiling process, customers may want to put a tea bag into a cup in which the boiled water will then be poured. After that, to make the water fully absorb the smell and substances in the tea bag, tea drinkers may want to wait for two minutes. Next, milk and sugar will be added to the tea to cultivate the aroma of the tea. Lastly, customers can drink their hot tea and enjoy the sweet taste of it.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, may, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 1.00243902439 1596% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 305.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66885245902 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4824890631 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 106.607317073 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56393442623 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.07073170732 654% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2985291361 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7647058824 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88235294118 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311482707905 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107988058178 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982161720375 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241385495097 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112027248963 0.0819641961636 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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