The pie chart and table below show the percentage of tourists traveling to Australia and specific information regarding their staying period, accommodation and the purpose of visit. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart and table chart give information about the rate of tourists traveling to Australia and specific regarding their staying period and other information.
According to the pie chart, during the period going to Asia the percentage of tourists traveling dramatically increased, while the number of days to staying in Asia saw significant decline. However, we can see if we look at the specific figures.
Look at the first pie chart, the percentage of tourists traveling in Asia and Europe is highest among four areas and received 37 and 35%. Meanwhile, the tears of tourists traveling in USA is highest second after Asia and Europe (18%). During the following quarter, other nations is lowest among four areas about 10%.
Look at the second chart is table, the specific information regarding their studying period in USA is longest( 16 days) and Europe is 10 days. Meanwhile, period of residence in Asia is shortest ( 7 days) and other nations is 10 days. Look at the information about accommodation in USA and other nations people always choosing camping and caravans. However, tourists in Asia and other nations is 5 or 4 start hotel. Finally, main activity when tourists traveling mainly swimming and sightseeing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the highest'.
Suggestion: is the highest
... the tears of tourists traveling in USA is highest second after Asia and Europe 18%. Durin...
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... period of residence in Asia is shortest 7 days and other nations is 10 days. Loo...
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Line 4, column 404, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hotel' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hotels'.
Suggestion: hotels
... Asia and other nations is 5 or 4 start hotel. Finally, main activity when tourists t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, regarding, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07462686567 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71039735198 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457711442786 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6635052739 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7272727273 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31080458297 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124680398542 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123455920099 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232853693065 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137672946154 0.0819641961636 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.