The given pie charts comapared the proportion of water use in industrial, agricultural and domestic sector in six areas. In general speaking,water highly used in agricultural sector while approximately similar proportion of water used in rest two other secondly in those sphere.
As can be seen the given pie charts, it is clear that the highest proportion of water used in agricultural sector in those areas except North America and Europe. Meanwhile, the second highest proportion of water used on agricultural sector in South America and Europe to 39% and 32% respectively, whereas the maximum percentage of a water used on industrial sector in North America and Europe to 48% and 53% respectively. The least proportion of a water used in a domestic sector in North America, Europe and South East Asia(13%, 15% and 7% repectively). Interestingly, the least proportion of water used on industrial sector in South America, Africa and Central Asia to 10%, 7% and 5% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , water
...sector in six areas. In general speaking,water highly used in agricultural sector whil...
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Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sphere' or 'those spheres'?
Suggestion: this sphere; those spheres
...ater used in rest two other secondly in those sphere. As can be seen the given pie charts...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o 10%, 7% and 5% respectively. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, secondly, so, whereas, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13721985801 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477987421384 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7289720953 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141640307565 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094473144491 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386552756153 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127802685958 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170013063143 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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