The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The maps illustrate the redevelopment of an airport will take place in the future.

Overall, the airport will experience a process of modernization, turning into the airport with more facilities. But it is worth to note that the airport will undergo changes in the North than in the South more significantly.

As it can be seen that, the Southwest airport is currently divided into 3 segments for departures, arrivals and north side. The left part of the airport comprises of security, passport control, a cafe and a check-in counter. The right part consists of passport control and customs. In terms of the north side, there is a walkway connected with 8 gates.

In the future, the walkway will be replaced with a sky train and more gates will be built to the northeast and northwest with 18 gates. When it comes to the left side, the cafe will be moved to the left bottom corner on the right side and the check-in counter will be turned into a bag drop and relocated to the previous cafe place. Regarding to the right side, a new cafe and an ATM are predicted to build on the east of the airport. The right bottom corner of the airport is anticipated to extend to the right side for a new car hire. Additionally, all segments in the middle of the airport will stay unchanged.

Votes
Average: 9.1 (18 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...orth side. The left part of the airport comprises of security, passport control, a cafe and ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59565217391 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62352668169 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9311823447 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0833333333 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115659705837 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533051816858 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431604543347 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944984751774 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474534337859 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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