The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map indicates how the southwest of an airport will redevelop in the following year according to the plans. There have been several changes, the most noticeable being the increased number of gates, the introduction of further amenities such as shops, hire car service, ...
At present, there are totals of 8 gates in the southwest area and passengers can go from gate 1 to 3 or 4 by the walkway. In the departures lounge, there appears to be a check-in desk and a café on the opposite side. However, there remains a blank space in the arrivals lounge. After the security and passport control services, there are no facilities before passengers come into the gates.
Turning to the after development plan, as can be seen, there will be an establishment of the gates, which reach to a number of 18 gates, and it can be arrived to the gate needed by sky train. Instead of blank spaces behind the security and passport control sectors in recent days, there will be the appearance of shops in the next year's plan. Within the departures lounge, there is going to have an arrangement in the situation of the check-in desk and the café and also the emergence of the bag-drop service, which will locate next to the café. Moreover, it plans to have 4 entrances in both departures and arrivals lounge instead of 2 previously. In the arrivals lounge, there will be an extended corner in the bottom right in order to build a car hire service. On the contrary, there will also an operation of an ATM and a new coffee shop.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... following year according to the plans. there have been several changes, the most not...
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Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...... At the present time, there are a total of 8 gates in the southwest area and pa...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...s a blank space in the arrivals lounge. after the security and passport control servi...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no facilities'?
Suggestion: there are no facilities
...security and passport control services, there is no facilities before passengers come into the gates. ...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
...rrived to the gate needed by sky train. instead of blank spaces behind the security and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 274.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60218978102 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58799772631 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510948905109 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8515896419 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.083333333 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148651862287 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576071988793 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597687101181 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963092864639 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579429578053 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.