The proportion of single child families in cities outskirts and rural areas of China 1980 2000

Essay topics:

The proportion of single-child families in cities, outskirts and rural areas of China 1980 - 2000.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of single-child families in metropolis, suburbs and countryside of China from 1980 to 2000.

It is clear from the bar chart that all the proportions in three different areas decreased. Additionally, the figure of one-child families in 2000 was by far highest during the research period.

In 1980, the proportion in cities was highest, at 50%, while the figure for rural areas was significantly lower, at only 10%. In 1990, the percentage of single-child families in cities increased nearly twice as much as the figure in 1980. Then there was a significant fall in outskirts about 70% and reached the lowest point of 20% in the countryside.

In 2000, nearly 100% of one-child families were from cities, which was the highest figure during the period. By contrast, the percentage of China's on-child household went down dramatically to approximately 70% in rural areas.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17567567568 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98764041545 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 12.0565075789 43.030603864 28% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.75 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421317823152 0.215688989381 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166120778238 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755642677245 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25187401071 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456333008399 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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