Some people believe that economic growth of any country reduces poverty and hunger while other think that it causes damage to the environment. Discuss both the views and give your opinion
With the steady growth in modernisation, The lifestyle of people have been greatly affected. They have achieved various milestones. However,some issues remain unchallenged and as complex as ever. One such issue here is that economic development. This particular topic asserts that economic growth: should it is responsible for reduction in poverty and hunger or vandalism to eco system? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimesions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is group of people who believe that economic development reduces poverty and hunger. In this present era, poverty and hunger is the “burning question of the day”. They strengthen their view point by claiming that there is rapid flourishment in the industry sector. Due to this, new industries are open.The industries require more and more labour. With the help of this, each and every individual work which helps them to handle the budget of thier family. The outcome is that, it become very beneficial to reduce the issue of poverty and hunger. The best epitome is that, there is a survey counducted by hindustan times in which they said that in the developed countries; industries are open on a large scale which helps them to minimize the poverty and hunger as compare to undeveloped countries.
On the flip side, there are antagonists to this assertions who believe that economic growth harm to the environment. They bolster their view point they claim that there is a advancemt in agriculture sector. The large amount of pesticides and insectides are use to get best crop. Well, these chemicals assist to improve the yield of crop and helps to reduce hunger and poverty but, no doubt; they depletion the abiotic sector such as water bodies and soil by polluting them which are the “part and parcel” of human life.Zimbabwe would be the perfect example of this.There is a survey conducted by environment department and they find out that in zimbabwe they take lots of step to minimize their poverty and hunger but, the outcome is that they had been unbalance the environment.
To crown it all,I pen down saying that,weighing both the option; I believe that there is no single conclusion still; I take this ground that an effective clap requires both use of hands so i think poverty and hunger should be reduce but without any distrubance in the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, well, i think, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 6.8 309% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 3.15609756098 634% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 5.60731707317 856% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 965.302439024 207% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 398.0 196.424390244 203% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02763819095 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 3.73543355544 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75597905837 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 106.607317073 191% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51256281407 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 283.868780488 221% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 109.959153471 43.030603864 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217869107492 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686763294238 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699029598087 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139327374661 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313003855654 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 40.7170731707 231% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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