The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison

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The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The supplied pictorial and tabular chart delineates the information about amount of electricity and where it is used by typical Australian households. The data is calibrated in per centum and kilowatt.

To commence with, pie chart depicts, water heating consumed 25% of energy which is three times more than energy consumed by fridges and lighting. Further more, most of the energy is used by heating and cooling with 38%, whereas least energy is applied on stand by power with 3% only. Similarly, other appliances such as, hairdryer, iron and dish washers accessed 16% energy in households.

Probing ahead, it is noticed in tabular chart, when there is 1 individual than electricity consumed is 5000 to 6500 kWh. Moreover, when number of people are 2, 3 and 6 or more than, power used is 6000 to 8500 kWh, 7500 to 10000 kWh and 12,000 to 16,000 kWh respectively.

Overall, it is evident that, small appliances use minimum energy, compared to others, while consumption of electricity inclines with rise in quantity of people.

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Average: 6.8 (5 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, similarly, whereas, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04678362573 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71007049039 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.407305289 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.285714286 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199568114264 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901445820636 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869703065352 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121296437479 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685220316718 0.0819641961636 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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