some people think that watching sport is a waste of time.do you agree or disagree?
Spending time on tv programs, especially sport, is one of the most popular entertainments which people prefer to choose in their free time. While some hold the view that it is waste of time, the other disagree.In my idea it has good points for those who are interested in.
Looking at sport’s programs entertain people who hold a particular interest in sport. They prefer to spend time on this kind of activity. Because they would be felt good. When someone has passion about something, putting time and money ahead it can make a better feeling for them.In addition, sport’s viewers will be affected by Adrenalin as well as sport’s doers.Releasing Adrenalin will cause some good emotions such as excitement, happiness in their body.Moreover,followers of sport need to be aware of every details about matches.they will enjoy talking and analyzing events.in this way,they look more satisfied about what they have done. Furthermore, being a viewer of sport, some times, would be persuade to become a sportman.So, watching sport can have good effects on and be beneficial for its fans.
To sum up, looking at sport activities is usefull mentally and physically for those who want to be a part of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10209203603 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 131.800452863 43.030603864 306% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.25 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 5.23603664747 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196210049939 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911049097379 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516327590761 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130171963869 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672183899751 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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