The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007.

Essay topics:

The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007.

A glance at the table provided reveals the information about transportation of people and freights using railway systems in four countries, namely Malaysia, Canada, China and UAE in 2007.

It is evident from the data provided that China had by far the highest number of people travelled with railway, at a staggering 27 million. Conversely, numbering 0.3 million, Canada saw the least popularity at taking railway amongst the four countries mentioned. Meanwhile, moderate level of passengers using railway as their transportation means was recorded in Malaysia and UAE, at somewhere between 5 and 6 million. Likewise, a similar pattern can be noticed in the average length travelled by people in the four countries. 1980 km was travelled by passengers in China, whereas in Canada, the figure was considerablely smaller at just 80km. Finally, less than 800 km was travelled in Malaysia and UAE.

As of freights transported using railway, the largest number at over 28 billion of tons was moved in Canada. In addition, the volume of goods carried in the rest of three countries was almost identical at about 22 billion of tons.

It is also interesting to note that while the most significant number of passengers travelled in China, Canada carried the most number of cargos.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, finally, if, likewise, so, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16346153846 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88203410149 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572115384615 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0530809752 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134720800142 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586685012921 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781625239608 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104172632005 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100780056025 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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