The table below gives information about the underground railway networks in six cities.
The chart illustrates the number of kilometers of route and passengers per year respectively, coming along with the opening date of six different cities' underground railways systems.
Overall, it is noticeable that the earlier the date opened was, the longer railways route had, except in Kyoto. Furthermore, Japan had both the highest and fewest quantity of underground railways users, which were in Tokyo and Kyoto compared to other destinations.
As can be seen obviously, London railways system was the oldest among other cities, which was opened back to 1863; thus, it had the longest length of route, at 396 kilometer. However, there were just 775 millions people choosing to use this system. While the train systems in Kyoto was built 20 years later than the previous city and earlier than Los Angeles, the newest train line, this city had the shortest route, at 11 kilometers each leading to the fewest number of passengers each year, which were 45 millions people.
Moreover, the number of passengers using this transportation in six cities were varied. Although Tokyo was the third oldest underground railways line and kept the length of the route at 155 kilometers, it stand out to have the highest number of travelers each year, started at 1927 millions people. Paris ranked second in the quantity of people going by underground railways, at 1191 millions passengers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
... with the opening date of six different cities underground railways systems. Overall,...
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Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the earlier the'. Did you mean 'earlier the'?
Suggestion: earlier the
...ystems. Overall, it is noticeable that the earlier the date opened was, the longer railways ro...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...had the longest length of route, at 396 kilometer. However, there were just 775 millions ...
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Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...round railways line and kept the length of of the route at 155 kilometers, it stand o...
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Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stands'?
Suggestion: stands
...h of of the route at 155 kilometers, it stand out to have the highest number of trave...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, third, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13716814159 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63253512971 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561946902655 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8836024074 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139379310611 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672561280841 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464504448583 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105910278134 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435938126791 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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