The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport.You should write at least 150 words

Essay topics:

The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport.
You should write at least 150 words

The table illustrates the grams of CO2 emission per European passenger for various means of transports while the pie chart describes European Union spending on transport. As can be seen from the diagram, air transport by far emitted the highest gram of CO2 per person and the EU spends the most of roads and railways.

According to the bar chart, the grams of CO2 per person exhaled by flying in air stands at 355, approximately three times as much as cars which are the next largest producers. Buses cam next with more than 50 grams of CO2. The lowest gram of CO2 per passenger is emitted by coaches with just under 50 while maritime and rail stands at the same level of 50.

The highest percentage of funds is spent on Roads with 52%. Railways are not far behind with just above 3 out of 10 while public transport is spent three time less. The remaining 7% comes from intermodal, inland waterway, ports, airports and unknown with 2% or less each.

Votes
Average: 10 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the roads') or simply say ''most roads''.
Suggestion: most of the roads; most roads
...of CO2 per person and the EU spends the most of roads and railways. According to the bar c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58479532164 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37248225916 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619883040936 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6708447984 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195136937732 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088003987698 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101656676036 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134437139897 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961269057493 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.