The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table gives information about projected sales during lunch and dinner every day from October 7 to 13 at a small food chain in a downtown business district.

Overall, more people dine in at the particular restaurant during the night than those eating at lunchtime. however, the sales experienced fluctuations over the seven days.

In details, beginning October 7, the profit of the small food chain increases during evening with $3623 on Monday which rises slightly the day after by more than $200. Wednesday night, fewer costumers spend money for dinner at the restaurant which decreases to $3445 dollars. However, it is Friday evening that the sales reach the peak of $4350, unfortunately, the weekends have the lowest especially Sunday with only $2450 sales.

In contrary, people who eat lunch at this restaurant in downtown district continue to increase from Monday to Wednesday ($2400 - $ 25950). It has a slight decline in the sales in Thursday afternoon, but it rises again the second day at $ 2375 and $ 2500 respectively. In similarity with the profit of dinner during weekends, those eating at lunchtime also plummeted.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...e night than those eating at lunchtime. however, the sales experienced fluctuations ove...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$25950'.
Suggestion: $25950
...increase from Monday to Wednesday 400 - $ 25950. It has a slight decline in the sales i...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2375'.
Suggestion: $2375
...n, but it rises again the second day at $ 2375 and $ 2500 respectively. In similarity ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2500'.
Suggestion: $2500
...ises again the second day at $ 2375 and $ 2500 respectively. In similarity with the pr...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14207650273 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71636699677 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7137319994 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193793794878 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806866893822 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655589052405 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135467733258 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06723003454 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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