We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, crime detection, and even to fly planes. What things will computers be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
The invention of computer is considered as one of the greatest breakthroughs in human history. due to the popularity and the many uses of computers, the over-reliance of the people to this technology is continuously growing. we are now living in the digital age where computer is integral in various fields like business, healthcare, law enforcement and transportation. this essay will discuss the possible uses of computers in the future and the reason why human should be skeptical to its advantages.
To begin with, there are more to look forward for the future innovations of computers. For instance, by the use of Artificial intelligence, a time will come that all vehicles will be operated by computer which will minimize the rate of road accidents. moreover, heavy machineries and home appliances will be manipulated by AI which will decrease the manual labor. lastly, this technology can be used in developing faster space ships that will lead to more space explorations, thus a greater knowledge of understanding the universe that can be essential to the survival of human race. Therefore, the era of computer does not stop today; it will continue to progress in the future.
we cannot deny the fact that benefits of computers lead to the dependence of human to this machines. this is because of the ease and convenience it brings to people’s day to day living. Firstly, employees apply this technology to increase efficiency in the service they provide like sending emails or storing documents which is also helpful to the students in making their research papers and assignments. moreover, transactions nowadays are done in computers like money transfers, online shopping and even communication.
Notwithstanding, despite the positive effects computers have, we are becoming totally dependent to it which should not be the case. we must remember that no matter how smart these machines are, they are still made of metal and ran by electricity which means there are loopholes that we should be more aware of. Apart from this, if people continue to rely on this, robots for example, run by computers are invented which can replace human in working population. In addition, computers can be infected by software viruses, prone to hacking which results to identity theft and fraud. lastly, as like any other machines, this continuous exposure to this technology can be harmful to health due to the radiation in emits in its screens.
To recapitulate, computer is indeed an invention that changes the way how humans look in the world they live in. I am certain that its development will continue in the next decades or even centuries. However, the dependence to this technology should be in reduced. I do believe that no machine can overpower the human intelligence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2335.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 455.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13186813187 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97526249833 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536263736264 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6652341352 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.136363636 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6818181818 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382465433929 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111281371267 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693388105471 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213648233448 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482544819141 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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