The bar chart shows the number of overseas students enrolled in a third year Computer Science course at a Canadian college.
The bar graph gives information about the percentage of male and female foreign students in their third year of study in a computer science course at a Canadian college.
Overall, there are higher number of female overseas college students from the 4 different countries who studied in Canada except for Sri Lanka where more male students enrolled in computer science course. The networking core option is more popular for the female foreign students excluding france while database is more common for men from the Asian countries.
In terms of networking core enrollees, there are respectively 7%,6 % and 5% of the female chinese, Malaysian and Singaporean students studying this course while only 1 % of male students for each countries. However, no female student from france chooses to attend the course.
In terms of those who study database, 7% of men who enrolled in this area are chinese, 5% higher than women followed by Sri Lankan male students at 6% while its female counterpart is comprised only of 2% enrollees. 4% of Singaporean male students attending the course are twice higher than the number of female. In contrary, 3% of the enrollees of the database core are Sri Lankan women, which is three times higher than men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, third, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07317073171 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58442818842 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0503061951 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262918668186 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126415169814 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124990178038 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189604495252 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129724938438 0.0819641961636 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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