The table illustrates the differences in average hours and minutes that UK males and females spend on distinguish activities every day.

Essay topics:

The table illustrates the differences in average hours and minutes that UK males and females spend on distinguish activities every day.

The table illustrates the differences in average hours and minutes that UK males and females spend on distinguish activities every day.
In general, there are similar in routine time for basic needs of both genders such as sleep, resting, personal care and time for meals. The significant differences are leisure time, working and households.
Males spend more time enjoying and relaxing then female, by 1,16 times per day for all leisure general, especially in sport and games which as 1.7 times many as female spend. While average time for traveling, reading and social life and entertainment likely stay the same level in both genders, about 1.3 hours, 0.2 hours and 1.25 hours respectively per day.
It is clear that the man spends more time working and studying than woman, with 5,25 hours per day towards male while female only take 2,26 hours. Meanwhile, women tend to take more time for housework and childcare, almost double time than the man does.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, in general, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01875 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39901509739 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1380572759 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332539328413 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212272979863 0.103423049105 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.327328055607 0.0843802449381 388% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326670636737 0.15604864568 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.392349073856 0.0819641961636 479% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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