The table shows the percentage of people with mobile phones who use various features on their phone. Summarise tje information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given picture illustrates the amount of people with mini computer who gain access to varieties of features in 3 different period:2006, 2008 and 2010 respectively. Overall, it is clear that making phone calls had the highest percentage, while search the internet and record video had no figure in a particular year.
To begin, in 2006 search the internet and record video account for zero percent, while playing of music, playing of games and taking photos accounted for 12%,17% and 66% respectively. Furthermore, sending text messages generated 67% and on the other hand making of calls peaked the values 100%.
Consequently, in 2008 record video and search the internet saw an increase and generated 9% and 14% respectively. playing of music 18%, playing of games 42% and taking of photos accounted for 75%. Hence, sending of text messages was 89% while making of phone calls maintained it's value.
In 2010, record video had increased tremendously to 35%, while search the internet almost doubled its previous value. playing of music, playing of games, and taking of photos were 26%, 41%, and 76 % respectively. sending of text messages was 79%, meanwhile making of calls saw a reduction by 1%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Playing
... and generated 9% and 14% respectively. playing of music 18%, playing of games 42% and ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Playing
...rnet almost doubled its previous value. playing of music, playing of games, and taking ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sending
...s were 26%, 41%, and 76 % respectively. sending of text messages was 79%, meanwhile mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16243654822 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71601210658 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532994923858 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2229455191 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.7 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0765127925732 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338083770167 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423092129566 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559346487636 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052480946469 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.