Some people belive that using animals to test the safety of human medicines is cruel and unwarranted, whereas others feel it is a medical necessity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
Nowadays, there have been controversies concerning the use of animals as a test run for human medicines, painting it as an heartless decision. On the other hand, others think it is explicit to the medical field at large. I will be discussing in this essay both stances and what I opined to believe.
Medicine is particularly an essential act in the life of ill individuals and requires to be taken with extreme caution, because life's will be at stake if carefully precautions are not adhered to strictly.
Although the act of using an animal as an experiment is a consequential one, but truth be told, the reason is it's called manslaughter and this act is against the vertinary law. I am against the above thoughts. All creatures are of great importance as well as humans, truth be told, but the deeds needs to be done. Because it is believed that rat is the only creature that has the same biological makeup as compared to humans. In my own opinion, it is acceptable to be me, small creatures do not have a life of their own, we in a way determine their existence.
For instance, in 1914, there was a published article that said and i quote 'thanks be to God for my pet that saved me from consuming poison'. I was amazed by the content after reading through. Obviously 80% of scientists can not take for granted and can never dislodge the fact that animals are savers when it comes to hypothesis .
Furthermore, performing experiments on little creatures gives us a better mechanisms of actions of drugs, helps us to know the side effects accompanies by each drugs as well as it's detrimental combination. I am fully in agreement of the afore opinion.
In conclusion, it is thought by some that using an animal as an experiment is manslaughter but I oppose to it,this hypothesis done on animals are ways of saving millions of lives from death of fake drugs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66060606061 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8358620428 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.68023367 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.533333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127868296313 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402049644367 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415791206002 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643362918388 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602675198799 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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