The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

<span style="font-family: Roboto, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">The tables below compare the sales of two kinds of Fairtrade-labeled farm products(tea and pineapples) among five different countries between 2010 and 2015. The unit is measured in millions of euros.

Overall, it is clear that Austria was the best seller of both tea and pineapples among these countries in 2010. By 2015, Austria grew dramatically in selling pineapples and remained the best sale record, whereas France surpassed Austria in tea and became the champion of tea sellers.

The first table shows these five countries all grew in selling of tea, albeit to widely varying degrees. Particularly, France and Austria, which grew from 2.5 millions of euros to 21 millions of euros and doubled its sells from 4 million respectively.

When it turns to pineapples, Austria and France also had an enormous increase in sales. In addition, sales of pineapples in the Netherlands grew more than three times to 6.5 million euros from 2010 to 2015. However, it can be seen in 2015 a slightly declined in Norway and Germany, which dropped from 2.8 millions of euros to 2 million euros and reduced nearly 1 million euros separately.</span><br>

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
..., France and Austria, which grew from 2.5 millions of euros to 21 millions of euros and doubl...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '21 million'.
Suggestion: 21 million
...hich grew from 2.5 millions of euros to 21 millions of euros and doubled its sells from 4 mill...
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Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
...orway and Germany, which dropped from 2.8 millions of euros to 2 million euros and reduced ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32124352332 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36474146712 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59067357513 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8161020467 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.111111111 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15039506517 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664379182929 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06099714232 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999293770795 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494035658406 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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