The tables shows data about the average length of time (in minutes) that people of different ages spend in a consultation with family doctors in a number of countries.
A glance at the table reveals the information about the average time (units are measured in minutes) that people of various ages spend in a advice with family doctors in a nine countries.
We can clearly see that despite their age differences Chile citizens dedicate most of their time in a consultation with family doctors (35 minutes on average), followed by Italy (23 minutes on average). As for other countries (France, Brazil, Japan, USA, India, Kenya) they spend approximately 20 minutes to the consultant, with exception of UK which dedicates only 10 minutes on average.
Observing this data elaborately, it is evident that people at their 10's and 20's dedicate the least of their time (16 on average), Chile is exceptional with 32 minutes. Nonetheless, it has increased rapidly from the age 20 and reached 29 in France, while it has declined moderately to 12 minutes in Kenya, also with the exception of Chile.
Lastly, it is evident that people at their age above the 60's tend to dedicate most of their time by taking an advice from family doctors. Therefore, average time has increased almost in all countries to more than 15 minutes, except Japan and UK.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...es that people of various ages spend in a advice with family doctors in a nine countries...
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Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...moderately to 12 minutes in Kenya, also with the exception of Chile. Lastly, it is evident that peo...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...o dedicate most of their time by taking an advice from family doctors. Therefore, average...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84848484848 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66046109911 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580808080808 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.2079105863 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.142857143 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354573386155 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167644595929 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125707215357 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23807155671 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128295683358 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.