The upper map demonstrates what the entrances like beside the roads to an urban hospital in 2007, while the other one presents the achievements of upgrading project after three years.
Referring to the map of 2007,there were, obiviously, three bus stops locating in each side of the hospital road with a car park for staff and public on the eastern side of the city road.Besides, an entry ponit was built up in the ring road around the city hospital to facilitate the transportation of the above two places. Futhermore, two T-junctions in the city road were found in the map connecting city road and ring road.
To the year of 2010,various changes had been occured on this area. To begin with, six bus staion had been grouped into one on the left of the hospital road, strenching to two accesses heading to roundabouts used to be road crossing in 2007.On top of that,the right side of the hospital was utilised as the car park only for staffs, whereas the parking place for the public was moved to the east side of ring road, which left an access to the ring road.
To sum up, the whole improving project promoted the transportation significantly surrounded by the hopsital.Although the entry point by the left side of the hospital road and the size of this area stayed unchanged, there were huge changes happening in three years' time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...ic on the eastern side of the city road.Besides, an entry ponit was built up in the ri...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oad.Besides, an entry ponit was built up in the ring road around the city hospita...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...abouts used to be road crossing in 2007.On top of that,the right side of the hospi...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... be road crossing in 2007.On top of that,the right side of the hospital was utilised...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
... the east side of ring road, which left an access to the ring road. To sum up, the who...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...ignificantly surrounded by the hopsital.Although the entry point by the left side of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, whereas, while, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74786324786 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74986966665 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.91542784 43.030603864 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.166666667 112.824112599 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 22.9334400587 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.23603664747 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228535739117 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124715870871 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692511525286 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13476483053 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710580139525 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.2329268293 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.3012195122 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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