The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the path leading to a city hospital in two different years, 2007 and 2010. It is clear to see that it under went major changes, especially the car park area was transformed in the period of 3 years.
In 2007, the road was built fairly simple. Starting at City road, there was an intersection with Hospital Road to the North, and the Hospital Road was the direct path to the hospital. Along Hospital road, there were 6 bus stops placed on both sides. Moreover, on the East of this road, there was also a car parking space for staff and public. At the end of this road was the hospital which was surrounded by Ring road.
Through the course of 3 years, the road had been developed, with some modifications and additions. At the two ends of Hospital road, roundabouts were constructed. Beside that, replacing bus stops was a new Bus station, situated on the West wing of Hospital road and connected to the roundabouts. Instead of a joint car park area on the east of this road, in 2010, it was changed into a staff only. However, a new Public car park was built on the North of the hospital.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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The maps illustrate the path leading to ...
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Suggestion: underwent
...07 and 2010. It is clear to see that it under went major changes, especially the car park ...
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...ransformed in the period of 3 years. In 2007, the road was built fairly simpl...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bus' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'buses', 'busses'.
Suggestion: buses; busses
...ital. Along Hospital road, there were 6 bus stops placed on both sides. Moreover, o...
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... which was surrounded by Ring road. Through the course of 3 years, the road ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48529411765 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47922451785 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6098030985 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168101281089 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808300103522 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639084559654 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127394055994 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252494023325 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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