Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your lettere
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to enrolle for an advanced excel course announced by your college. I am currently working in Insurance company as Risk analyst. Majority of my job tasks are carried on excel sheet which require expertise to handle such as pivot table and advanced formula.
I was going through the eligibility criteria for the course and figured out that elementary course is mandatory requirement to opt for this course. Unfortunately, I am unable to meet this criteria because neither I have such course certificate nor I have time to complete this initial requirement before announcement of course because my job timings are from 9:00 to 9:00. Moreover, even I have to work on weekends due to the special project which will be ended by this summer.
I would really appreciate your help, if you provide any exception considering my situation or based on my working experience which is related to the basic excel working which is equal to elementary course. I am inclined to avail this course as it will lead to enhance my expertise in my current field and will add value to my CV.
I look forward to hear from you soon.
Your's Sincerely,
Amber
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rse. Unfortunately, I am unable to meet this criteria because neither I have such co...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t field and will add value to my CV. I look forward to hear from you soon. ...
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...l add value to my CV. I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Amb...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really, so, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86138613861 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69452494149 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59900990099 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4711133245 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165710916753 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603320436302 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493548804531 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985606442843 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462029076649 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.