Describe a problem with the equipment you bought recently and how you want the problem solved. Write a letter to the company
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Chi Chung – a recently accepted overseas student who is going to study at your institution, I am writing with regard to any guild that is operating at your university during the coming semester. As I am gaining entrance to an overseas university, i’m entirely anxious, therefore, I would rather to make some contact prior arriving.
I am specially interested to recognize whether there is any clubs for Iranian students. If so, could you possibly send me some brochures which containing information surround membership, or at least announce me with the contact details of any clubs that I can make my own independent enquiries?
I would so be grateful for any information you could provide about clubs related to computers, fitness or swimming, Since they are areas i’m interested in. I can be contacted at the address supplied. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Your sincerely,
Chi Chung
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Chi Chung – a recently accept...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to make some contact prior arriving. I am specially interested to recognize w...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are any clubs'?
Suggestion: there are any clubs
...ecially interested to recognize whether there is any clubs for Iranian students. If so, could you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, at least, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17834394904 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9514029447 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675159235669 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2918347741 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.625 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0712156914574 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.023236468638 0.0766984524023 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302868249799 0.0603063233224 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0497288686977 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00650728439943 0.0580467560999 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.