You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayed
by a day.
Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter
• Introduce yourself.
• Complain about the delay
• Explain the problems that is caused you
• Ask for a letter of apology and/or some form of compensation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
my name is Charole smith and a passenger who took your flight on 24th August from India to Australia. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with your service.
my return flight was booked on February 24 and was delayed by a day.After reaching the airport, Unfortunately I got to know about the postponement .this demeanor brings me nothing but inconvenience situation which may cost my job. To elucidate, firstly, I was supposed to present an vital presentation to my employer that due to this delay, I will not be able to present now. Secondly, I incurred additional costing of lodging and food expenses of about 10,000$.
I would like you to compensate me since all the consequences are caused by your airline. Also, I am entitled to get an apology letter to my boss from your organization clearly stating the reason behind the delay.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
charole smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: My
... my dissatisfaction with your service. my return flight was booked on February 24...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...on February 24 and was delayed by a day.After reaching the airport, Unfortunately I g...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ely I got to know about the postponement .this demeanor brings me nothing but inco...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ate, firstly, I was supposed to present an vital presentation to my employer that ...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng of lodging and food expenses of about 10,000$. I would like you to compensate...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
... lodging and food expenses of about 10,000$. I would like you to compensate me sin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, may, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86503067485 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9211603454 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687116564417 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6779945105 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220513164711 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876207635508 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357493890939 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122823080924 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404759131622 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.