An English speaking friend wants to spend a two week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice write a letter to your friend In your letter 1 offer to find somewhere to stay 2 give advice about what to do 3 give information
Dear Jay,
It was a very pleasant surprise to hear from you after such a long time. Frankly, I'm quite excited on your visit to my country and would be glad if you can stay with me at my home during your entire trip, so that we can reminisce some of our college days whenever you're free.
As this is the first time you're visiting India, let me suggest you some of the best places for you to visit. Although you have planned for a two-week trip, I don't want you spend the entire holiday in visiting all tourist traps like Taj Mahal, Marina and India Gate, and instead I'd suggest you to visit some off-beat places like Gir forest and Himalayas, as these places can give you an enthralling experience.
Could you let me know if you've some warm clothes with you for the trip? or else I would buy some for you, so that you won't be having a tough time with the weather.
Hoping to see you soon.
Your friend,
Raj
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...om you after such a long time. Frankly, Im quite excited on your visit to my count...
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Suggestion: you're
...nisce some of our college days whenever youre free. As this is the first time your...
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Suggestion: you're
...oure free. As this is the first time youre visiting India, let me suggest you some...
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Suggestion: don't
...you have planned for a two-week trip, I dont want you spend the entire holiday in vi...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...hal, Marina and India Gate, and instead Id suggest you to visit some off-beat plac...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
...experience. Could you let me know if youve some warm clothes with you for the trip...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...ome warm clothes with you for the trip? or else I would buy some for you, so that ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, frankly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30459770115 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00498948244 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9219285385 44.8134815571 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125062294874 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740280516143 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862144181816 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566380123999 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463966006532 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...om you after such a long time. Frankly, Im quite excited on your visit to my count...
^^
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...nisce some of our college days whenever youre free. As this is the first time your...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...oure free. As this is the first time youre visiting India, let me suggest you some...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...you have planned for a two-week trip, I dont want you spend the entire holiday in vi...
^^^^
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...hal, Marina and India Gate, and instead Id suggest you to visit some off-beat plac...
^^
Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
...experience. Could you let me know if youve some warm clothes with you for the trip...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...ome warm clothes with you for the trip? or else I would buy some for you, so that ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, frankly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30459770115 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00498948244 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9219285385 44.8134815571 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125062294874 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740280516143 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862144181816 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566380123999 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463966006532 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.