You are getting married Write a letter to an English speaking friend to invite him her to the wedding

Essay topics:

You are getting married. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend to invite him/her to the wedding

Dear Jim,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I’m pretty excited to invite you to my wedding on the 23rd of April this year.

You would be surprised to know about the bride. Do you remember Jaya about whom I talked about during our last meet? Yes, both our family accepted our proposal, and as we are relatives, it didn’t take much effort to convince them.

So, we have planned for a traditional three-day Hindu marriage from 23rd to 25th of April. The first day would a reception where we’d invite all our guests to a party. I’ve arranged for a DJ so that we can dance and enjoy the moment together. On the following day, we will have the wedding in the early morning hours. The final day would be fun as we used to conduct some fun games to entertain the couple and the guest.

I strongly need your presence during this auspicious moment of my life. As you are researching Indian tradition and culture, I hope this would be an excellent opportunity to collect some interesting information.

I eagerly look forward to your presence.

Love,
Rajeev

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66836734694 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41461324913 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637755102041 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0099473304 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3846153846 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104100681709 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036382518191 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448878372224 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059954360402 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592277564739 0.0580467560999 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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