at an event you attended recently, you met an employee of a company you would like to work at. You talk to her and she suggested that you should contact her if you needed any help with your job application.
write a letter to this employee. in your letter:
-remind her how you met and ask for some help
-tell her what kind of job you are interested in
-ask her about the company's job application process
Dear Ms. Rose
I am writing you regarding the brewers' conference which took place in San Francisco last fall. You and I were seated next to each other and, you were telling me about the exceptional graduate program your brewery has. And how you were a part of it when you were finishing your studies in Europe. I am about to close my final internship and, I would like to ask for your help if you're still willing to help me with a piece of advice about my upcoming application for the program.
First, let me explain which are the areas where I will be more interested in apply. I am a chemical engineer. Therefore, a process engineer is probably the safest choice. Nevertheless, I won't be mad if a position is available in the research and development department. I found it pretty challenging as well.
As someone who has experience in the application process of the graduate program, do you have any suggestions about which position I should apply for or if it is easier to be selected for any particular department knowing those in which I am interested?
Thank you so much for your help.
Best regards,
Carlos Becerra.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...d, I would like to ask for your help if youre still willing to help me with a piece o...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng application for the program. First, let me explain which are the areas where...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62686567164 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75477268665 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4503628714 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262855842831 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871815685379 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977725479678 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163938909592 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111542207268 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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