A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .....................,
Dear Amritha,
Hope you’re doing well. I am writing this letter to you as a request for you to take care of my pet cat, Sylvester, while I’m away on my holiday to New Delhi for 30 days. In this letter, I will chart out all the information pertaining to my contact details while I am on holiday, instructions about how to take care of Sylvester and all other household duties
I will start by charting out all the instructions required to take care of Sylvester right from the start of the day till the end of the day. You would have to come twice a day to ensure he is doing fine. Once in the morning at 8am and then in the evening at 7pm
Start of the day 8am: Sylvester wakes up sharp at 8am. This is when we feed him. His food and water bowls are kept in the second room which is the guest room. When he wakes up, please fill his food bowl with 50g of dry food and 20g of wet food. The dry food will be kept on top of the fridge and the wet food will be kept on the top compartment of the fridge and they will be portioned out into 30 bags. Once you have given the food to him in his food bowl, please fill his water bowl with 100 ml of water
After he has been fed, sylvester likes to be petted. Please pet him for 10 to 15 minutes after which he falls off to sleep
Since Sylvester is a playful cat, he likes to play with his toys. Before you leave for the day, you can place 2 of his toys next to him in the room. Both his toys will be kept in the brown cupboard which is in the guest room.
When you come back in the evening at 7pm to feed him his second meal, please spend 30 minutes with playing with him since he likes to play a lot. As he gets tired, you can feed him 50g dry food and 20g wet food at 7:30pm
Apart from all the above instructions, his medical files are kept in the same brown cupboard, in the left handside drawer. The file is white in colour with ‘Pet Aid Clinic’ written on it. He does not need any medications, but in the occasion of an emergency you can contact his vet Dr.Nikhil. His contact number is +91-9921048574 any time of the day since he is a very responsive person on call.
Also, while you are at home during the above mentioned timings, it would be of great help if you could look at some basic household duties. All you have to do is to ensure my cupboard, which is the white one in the master bedroom, is locked. And before you leave the house, please ensure all the windows and doors are locked because Sylvester is in the house and it would be unsafe to keep the windows and doors open
If you follow the above instructions, there will be nothing to worry. However, if you need to reach out to me incase of any emergency, my contact number during my holiday will be the same as now which is +919665271177. In case I am not reachable, you can contact my husband Mohit on his number +919970786792
Thank you very much for helping me out to take care of Sylvester while I’m on my holiday.
I will see meet you as soon as I am back from the holiday.
Lots of Love
Sweta
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Amritha, Hope you’re doing well. I am writing thi...
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Line 11, column 136, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: white
...n the left handside drawer. The file is white in colour with ‘Pet Aid Clinic’ written on it. He...
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Line 11, column 286, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nikhil
...an emergency you can contact his vet Dr.Nikhil. His contact number is +91-9921048574 a...
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Line 16, column 111, Rule ID: INCASE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in case of'?
Suggestion: in case of
...However, if you need to reach out to me incase of any emergency, my contact number during...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Love seems to be countable; consider using: 'Lots of (Love)'.
Suggestion: Lots of (Love)
...oon as I am back from the holiday. Lots of Love Sweta
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, so, then, well, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 7.48453608247 361% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 4.92783505155 386% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 74.0 32.9175257732 225% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 104.0 26.3917525773 394% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2460.0 937.175257732 262% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 598.0 206.0 290% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11371237458 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94510247834 3.78020617076 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17664351293 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 127.690721649 193% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.411371237458 0.622605031667 66% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 730.8 290.88556701 251% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 10.0 1.83505154639 545% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 12.6804123711 197% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1418946804 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.92 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 7.41237113402 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190041426116 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591493541377 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591827384288 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949699576659 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735331716464 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 70.7449484536 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 7.45979381443 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.