Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this.
Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain;
- why you are writing to them
- why you think the insurance should not be increased
- what you want them to do
Write at least 150 words
You DO NOT need to write any addresses
Dear Alex,
I am writing to you regarding the last communication from Safewheels that mentions there is an increase in my insurance monthly payment.
I am not pleased with the decision to increase the insurance payment on my car, which has a registration number plate - CAN 1234.
Even though there has been a decline in the number of accidents that take place in the area where I live in, the adjustment does not seem to be fair. Since January 2020, this is the second time that there is an increase in the payment. Currently, I am paying $450 every month that is on the higher side in the market. Any further increase in the payout amount will make it difficult for me to continue with Safewheels.
I have been with Safewheels insurance for over 3 years now. I would like to continue to take the services from your company. I would request you to please re-consider your decision. It will be helpful to continue at the current monthly paying amount.
Yours Faithfully,
Mohit
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Alex, I am writing to you regarding the last c...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to take the services from your company. I would request you to please re-consider...
^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hly paying amount. Yours Faithfully, Mohit
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, second
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73988439306 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62670714673 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601156069364 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6289832523 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5454545455 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279941784219 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972527205366 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627755538013 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154950726547 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074592888731 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Alex, I am writing to you regarding the last c...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to take the services from your company. I would request you to please re-consider...
^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hly paying amount. Yours Faithfully, Mohit
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, second
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73988439306 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62670714673 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601156069364 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6289832523 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5454545455 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279941784219 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972527205366 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627755538013 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154950726547 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074592888731 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.