Nowadays, people have greater access to fast food. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Even though the concept of fast food was originated in the US, in the second part of the 20th century, it has spread across rapidally across the whole world. Currently, It’s a whooping over thirty billion dollars industry. Greater access to fast food has brought us with few benefits, but the disadvantages outweight the benefits. In this essay, I would present both advantages and disadvantages and present how disadvantages outweight the benefits.
Firstly, the only noteworthy advantage that the fast food industry has given us is the convenience. It uses standardised processes that ensures that consistency of taste is delivered in the least amount of time. The convenience it brings in in times of busier lifestyles is unmatched to any food innovation of the century. For example, the travellers can rely on fast food when travelling to different cities / countries eventhough they might not be familliar with the local food. However, the convenience of quick food from standardised processes comes at a cost.
While there are many disadvantages of the widespread fast food trend, the most important ones are pertaining to the adverse affects on health. There is enough research that links obesity with fast food. There has been a constant increase in the number of heart patients due to obesity across the world. It has also been cited that the ingredients used in fast food industry have strong signs of causing cancer. In United States alone, over 40% of the population between the age of 40 and 70 is classified as obese. The problem is increasing across other counties as well. Such adverse effects on health is a big cost to pay for the conveience it delivers.
In conclusion, high accessibility to fast food has helped us have a more inter-connected globalised world, where in we get to experience standaridised food at fast speed, but it has effected us to become unhealthier versions of ourselves. The convenience it brings in comes at a very high cost of our health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93533101405 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6730319326 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284582703335 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078495417518 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767543308512 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166760189102 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429063341905 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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