You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter:
1. describe the situation
2. explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
3. say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to highlight an issue that I am facing regarding my current accommodation, which is a shared room with two beds. I am from the mechanical engineering course, while my roommate belongs to the Anthropology course. We have been sharing this room for 2 months now.
As you know, mechanical engineering is an extremely demanding subject with a lot of assignments, and it requires complete focus and dedication for a good ranking. On the other hand, my roommate completes her practical study during her classes and does not have much work to do outside of the class. Because of this, she spends her time either talking on the telephone or inviting her friends to the room. This becomes quite a distraction for me to stay focussed on my studies.
It would be great if I could get an option to switch my room to a private one, with a single bed. It would be much better for me to focus on my assignments, without causing any restrictions to anyone around me.
I sincerely hope you consider my request to shift my room type. Looking forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully,
Sweta Jobanputra
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, while, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69651741294 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78296735595 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636815920398 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3221303514 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8181818182 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166170348026 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656994248485 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522978940077 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105409322143 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458831457297 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.