Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternative ways to decrease crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Over the last decade, we have witnessed crime in most countries increasing at an alarming rate. While some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime, I along with many others believe in alternative ways to curb it such as death sentences. I will be discussing both the views in my essay today whie highlighting my reason of belief in death sentences.
Some people feel that the best way to punish a crime is long prison sentences due to the simple reason of increased suffering. A highetened period of suffering gives criminals the time to introspect and realise the crime they have committed. While that may not always teach them a lesson, it makes them re think their sole purpose of life. Although there are many examples of cases that have come out clean through this way, I still believe that may not be enough for certain unforgivable crimes such as rape, which is precisely why I think that there are other ways of reducing crime rate such as death sentences.
In my opinion, alternative ways such as death sentences are the best way reduce such horrendous crimes. I feel that it is the only justifiable way to punish such criminals for the sheer amount of loss and pain they could have caused to the victim's families. And from what I have witnessed in my country, India, the number of rape cases have reduced by 10% just be announcing death sentences. Which is why I strong believe this is the only true way to reduce crime.
As all things, there are always two sides to every opinion. Even though some people believe crime can be reduced by longer prison sentences, my opinion is stronger amongst people who believe in alternative ways such as death sentences and I think that sends out a strong message to criminals committing dangerous crimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
... death sentences. Which is why I strong believe this is the only true way to reduce cri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, while, i feel, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73566878981 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47552218115 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503184713376 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2984851703 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447833547876 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163242630267 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161730235825 0.0667982634062 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305137184007 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936330760989 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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