Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this.
Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain;
- why you are writing to them
- why you think the insurance should not be increased
- what you want them to do
Write at least 150 words
You DO NOT need to write any addresses
Dear Alex,
I am writing to you regarding the last communication from Safewheels that mentions there is an increase in my insurance monthly payment.
I am not pleased with the decision to increase the insurance payment on my car, which has a registration number plate - CAN 1234.
Even though there has been a decline in the number of accidents that take place in the area where I live in, the adjustment does not seem to be fair. Since January 2020, this is the second time that there is an increase in the payment. Currently, I am paying $450 every month that is on the higher side in the market. Any further increase in the payout amount will make it difficult for me to continue with Safewheels.
I have been with Safewheels insurance for over 3 years now. I would like to continue to take the services from your company. I would request you to please re-consider your decision. It will be helpful to continue at the current monthly paying amount.
Yours Faithfully,
Mohit
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Mr. Gupta I am writing to you in regards to an email I received from Maruti Insuran...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...ularly happy about this considering the on-going pandemic. As you know, the situatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, well, while, i feel, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78632478632 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79792822761 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619658119658 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0430649758 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306805817116 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956507072338 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572901288973 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166069619305 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335869079351 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.