A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for 3 months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter:
– give details of what you know about his company.
– explain your current situation
– give your answer to the offer and explain why
Dear Pratik,
I am writing this letter to thank you for the offer that you have made to me but I am afraid I will not be able to joinyouas I have my commitments towards my job and also the employer.
I am very well aware of the products and services your company is dealing with and the market that you have captured in just three years. I fondly remember the time when we sat over to discuss the business plan for your organization. I am also overwhelmed to know that you have your clients based in the USA, Canada and Sweden and this is nothing less than an evident for your exponential growth. In such a short span of time, you have truly become an entrepreneur.
You are aware that I am already working on a project with my current organization and have to travel overseas frequently. So, at this point of time, it seems a bit difficult to quit and join you. You know how determined I have always been towards my job and my employer! I would be unprofessional on my part to leave this job. However, if you need any input from me, at any point of time, please don’t hesitate as I will consider myself fortunate to help someone who is growing internationally.
I look forward to hear from you and hope that you will be able to empathize with me.
Yours Truly,
Navpreet
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you have captured in just three years. I fondly remember the time when we sat ov...
^
Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he business plan for your organization. I am also overwhelmed to know that you ha...
^
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...wing internationally. I look forward to hear from you and hope that you will be able...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, you know, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40585774059 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58147806326 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581589958159 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6135478698 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7272727273 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269794642349 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113799081976 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509467095868 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158575888948 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520107833187 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you have captured in just three years. I fondly remember the time when we sat ov...
^
Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he business plan for your organization. I am also overwhelmed to know that you ha...
^
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...wing internationally. I look forward to hear from you and hope that you will be able...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, you know, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40585774059 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58147806326 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581589958159 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6135478698 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7272727273 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269794642349 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113799081976 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509467095868 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158575888948 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520107833187 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.