You are planning to go to a music concert in your town and would like a friend to accompany you. Write a letter to invite your friend to the concert you are planning to go to.
In your letter say:
what the content of the music concert is
where and when is the music concert
why do you think your friend should go to this concert
Dear Mary,
I am writing to you with this fabulous news that I have two VIP passes of “Jonas Brothers” concert on which I wish to have your company.
“Jonas Brothers” , in my perception, is the most amazing young band with highly talented singers who happen to be brothers. Last month, they initiated their world tour due to which they are visiting our country too that has raised my excitement. Not only this, but the crew has decided that they are going to launch their new song as the highlight of this event, therefore, the event will have most popular numbers as well as this new song too.
You would even glad to know that the show is on weekend that is Sunday, thus, no day-off would be required. Moreover, the location is just in your vicinity, the Royal Park which I suppose, is just two miles away from your home, thereby, I will pick you up in the mid-way.
Most probably, you would be pondering over the fact that why I have chosen you as my company, so, let me clear you that you are a great companion when it comes to dancing and in this concert, we are going to get insane. Even, I am well-versed with your passion for rock music too so I think you would never like to miss a gala night like this.
Hoping to see you soon for this concert.
Yours truly,
Rory Gilmore
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sh to have your company Jonas Brothers in my perception is the most amazing you...
^^
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lar numbers as well as this new song too You would even glad to know that the sho...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, i suppose, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20746887967 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97621050618 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572614107884 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 241.0 16.3608247423 1473% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1014.0 76.5299724578 1325% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 241.0 16.8248392259 1432% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 72.0 4.34317383033 1658% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282624644413 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.282624644413 0.0766984524023 368% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168114996981 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093562763758 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 118.9 8.37731958763 1419% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -147.76 70.7449484536 -209% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 93.7 7.45979381443 1256% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.62 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.34 7.59969072165 241% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 98.4 8.54432989691 1152% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 94.0 8.15463917526 1153% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.