You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- thank your friend for the holiday
- explain that you left your wallet in their house
- give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Rose,
This past week was wonderful owing to your preparation for our holiday and I had the best time ever in Dubai with you and your family. But, I am writing you to mention about my wallet which I left at your place.
While expressing my feeling about this last week, I am short of words as your hospitality was quite warming. I cannot ignore the fact that you gave me your room with the beautiful view of “Dubai Frame” so that I could have best out of my stay. Most importantly, creating menus of all meals as per taste was commendable effort of yours and my thank you for all this would be very less of a gesture.
In all this merriment, when I was leaving the place to catch my flight, I probably have placed my wallet on the dressing table of your room. I vividly remember that your son, Jamie, hugged me from back playfully due to which I might forget to pick it up.
Apparently, the wallet consists of all my cards and Id proofs which I would be requiring nearly every day, thereby, I would really request you to send it back to me as early as possible. For the same, luckily, my aunt is in Dubai and she has plans to return tomorrow to India. Of course, I am bothering you but I will be grateful if you could hand it over to her at her place by today evening. Thus, she could carry it with herself tomorrow.
Thanking you again and hope to see you pretty soon.
Yours truly,
Maria.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...the wallet consists of all my cards and Id proofs which I would be requiring nearl...
^^
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this evening' is used.
Suggestion: this evening
...uld hand it over to her at her place by today evening Thus she could carry it with herself to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... see you pretty soon Yours truly Maria
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, really, so, thus, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 32.9175257732 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13059701493 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12979308878 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 268.0 16.3608247423 1638% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1107.0 76.5299724578 1446% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 268.0 16.8248392259 1593% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 55.0 4.34317383033 1266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365316691563 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.365316691563 0.0766984524023 476% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226483391742 0.12726935374 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109866258092 0.0580467560999 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 132.0 8.37731958763 1576% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -175.16 70.7449484536 -248% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 104.3 7.45979381443 1398% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.15 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.87 7.59969072165 248% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 109.2 8.54432989691 1278% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 8.15463917526 662% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.