You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday When you got home you realised you had left your wallet there Write a letter to your friend In your letter thank your friend for the holiday explain that you left your wallet in their house give them ins

Essay topics:

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sarah,

Hope this letter finds you well. I have landed safely in Punjab and missing the moments we spent together. I am writing to thank you and to request you to send the wallet I have left at hour house.

It was really a nice time for me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for making my trip so special. Last week will be an unforgettable time in my life as it was a great chance for us to relive our nostalgic memories. Also, the food you cooked for me was very delicious, I am still missing that taste.

When I reached the airport, I realized that my wallet was not with me. I remember that I have kept it on the dressing table when I was getting ready and forgot to pick it up in a hurry. Luckily, my passport was in my bag, so I was still able to travel.

As you know, how it is difficult to survive without a purse because I have some important documents in it, such as a debit card, company identity card, and my driving license, So I would request you to courier the purse as soon as possible.

You send it to my office address as I spend most of my time there.

Say hello to all.

Yours truly,

Jass

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, still, well, such as, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.125 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21795490928 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575892857143 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8679076936 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0769230769 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248208108757 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915713432706 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804361655842 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128264646195 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874813881398 0.0580467560999 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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