Employers should focus on personal qualities over qualifications and experience when choosing someone for a job. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that employers should emphasize personal attributes rather than academic degrees and experience while recruiting workers. I, however, totally disagree with this assertion because some fields are impossible to deal without a relevant qualification and experience make workers enable to predict future obstacles.
Primarily, it becomes mandatory to have education degree to deal with humans in various fields. That is to say, while studying in the universities, students have tocomplete some practical assignments and get training especially in the domain of medicine and nursing to become masters of their fields, which teach them how to deal with people having health issues.Thus, without having an appropriate degree might put the lives of several patients into danger. For example, It has been noted that 60 percent of companieshad to go out of their businesses due the management by inexperienced staff.
Apparently, working for long time give makes people capable of knowing in advance about the troublesome situations. In other words, when individual use the knowledge which theyhave grasped while learning, in real world, become able to handle various difficulties and also prepare a guess in advance about the upcoming situations and prepare themselves accordingly, that might not be possible without having experience. A recent study conducted has revealed that about 78% of people with experience have the problem-solving skills.
On balance, owing to the importance of qualfication and knowledge in several domains, I am convinced that employers should concentrate on both these aspects for the prosperity of their businesses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67068273092 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00368853314 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654618473896 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.2133753475 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.888888889 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105975435004 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473657480704 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441915700444 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740829951076 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537462166247 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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