some people think that parents should deal with the bad behaviour of their childer, while otjers think that laws should be made. Discuss both prespective and give your own opinion
It is claimed by a number of individuals that misbehave of the growing buds should be monitored by their birth givers, while others think that some stringent laws should be enforced to deal with their bad actions. However, in my opinion, children are innocent and should only be monitored by their guardians with great care.
To commence with, fathers are the best teachers for the young minds. That is to say, youngsters spend initial years of their life with their elders, and are more inclined to follow the way taught by mothers and fathers. Thus, mothers are responsible for inculcating good habits in the children and can direct them towards right path with appropriate manner if they commit any mistake, that might not be possible for others than their guardians to do so. A recent survey has shown that about 45% of kinder are properly nurturing by their birth givers and perform wisely in public.
However, emotional attachment between child and responsibility taker relationship gives rise to the bad habits of youngsters. In other words, mother has blood relation with their young ones which stop them to be harsh or strict with their adolescent, if they behave badly, and it becomes compulsory sometimes to punish them for their inappropriate actions. Therefore, including some external authorities to control their such nature is essential. Taking an example of Indians, about 34% of young minds are committing crimes, and are kept in correctional schools for a definite period of time can give them a better future.
In my opinion, toddler perform mistakes unwillingly and should be supervised with love and responsibility, which can only be done by their elders because they know their wards more closely. Therefore, the onus rests on the shoulder of their care takers to make their youngsters a better version of themselves.
On balance, the debate of weather the nonsense behavior of growing buds should be controlled by their birth givers or law bodies is constantly heating these days. This essay agrees that due to innocent nature of the kinder, they should only be treated by their parents with great care.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in my opinion, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07954545455 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60985398249 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6997105071 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.714285714 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289370003001 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104889094305 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894587676646 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184428417546 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100973239043 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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