Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep due to this.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:
• describe the problem with the dog
• explain why it is important for you to sleep
• outline what your neighbours could do about the situation
Dear Mr. Rastogi,
I am writing this letter to let you know that your dog, Bruno,which often make loud noises, specially at night, thereby creating trouble owing to which I have sleepless nights.
I normally observe that after you bring Bruno back from the walk, it is made to retire in its kennel. in this regard, I think it is too early for any pet to get into its house and because of this, if/it feels restless and keeps on barking throughout the night. There can also be a probability that it has some health issues which is not letting it settle down.
I am a University student and prefer to get up early in the morning for completing my academic tasks with fresh mind. Hence, it is imperative for me to take a sound sleep of six hours at least but your dog has made it quite difficult for me to take proper rest during night. I would request you if you can take care of my concern and try to give a congenial environment to Bruno by letting it move freely in your compound and/or get it checked properly to a veterinary doctor for finding out the health-related problem, if any.
I am sure you will consider my request and take an appropriate action as early as possible.
Yours truly/sincerely,
Navpreet
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, at least, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52466367713 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56766303916 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650224215247 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.289839651 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268159477506 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979433661936 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708881435726 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144862877651 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772064835485 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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