A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the problem, explain what happened to you in the past, and suggest possible solutions to the problem. Write at least 150 words.
Dear Dave,
How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in great health and metal peace. First of all, Congratulation on your new role! I know it is completely different from your previous experience, I had same situation six months back so I can easily put myself in your shoes.
When I moved to sales department, I was very horrified initially as I had no prior experience about the field. So I requested thorough knowledge transfer sessions from management, which certainly had helped me enormously to strengthen my grip over the division. Furthermore, I started referring popular sales book to get familiar with its terminology. And, with trial and error, over the time, I’m completely comfortable in this role and see very bright future.
Why don’t you try to get sessions from your existing team? In that way, you’d understand that how things work in the sales, especially in your team. There are several websites with pretty useful knowledge that I have collected over the period of time. I will share with you all my materials along with list of the websites.
I hope this will be helpful to you and wish you luck for the new endeavor.
Best wishes,
Sandip
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...nowledge that I have collected over the period of time. I will share with you all my materials...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he new endeavor. Best wishes, Sandip
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92610837438 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71966691416 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669950738916 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0174790457 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9230769231 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230398147734 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807629426335 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712496972041 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153329110829 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076323125431 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.