A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him or her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Thank him/her for the invitation.
Explain why cannot come.
Ask him/her about other times to visit.
Dear John,
Thank you so much for your invitation. It's a really generous offer to put me up at your place in Tokyo. I would really like to come and it is very kind of you but unfortunately, I won't be able to make it due to my hectic work schedule.
I have just started a new teaching job, and I have been working around the clock. It is been intense! I do not mean to complain, I have been enjoying it immensely and the school I am working at is actually our old high school, which has been a lot of fun. Do you remember Mrs Brown? She is actually my supervisor.
Could you let me know of another time I can visit? Because of the school holidays, I will be free in the new year and I will also be free in winter so if you are available then, I would certainly love to escape the cold to visit you.
I can't wait to hear from you.
Your friend,
Jay.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, Thank you so much for your invitation. I...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... Thank you so much for your invitation. Its a really generous offer to put me up at...
^^^
Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... to escape the cold to visit you. I cant wait to hear from you. Your friend, ...
^^^^
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hear from you. Your friend, Jay.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04069767442 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28915512931 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622093023256 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5949797733 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1818181818 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180145580924 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829502016362 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881698596196 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912088266707 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070432271353 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.86 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.