A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
- Describe some possible disadvantages
- Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Emma,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I give you my recommendation in terms of taking a camping holiday for the first time this summer.
Firstly, my home country is the perfect place to have fun in summer. To be honest, there are an abundance of mountains for travelling because the government of my nation has developed about it so many times for tourists who want to camp. I assuem that you might enjoy your summer time here involving the mother nature of my country which gives you very fantastic experience because the weather is really cool and nice not hot and humid. That is the reason why I recommend you to come over this land.
I need to explain that there are some potential disadvantages even though it is good for camping. My country's mountains have a plenty of insects that may harm you such as mosquito. Moreover, some mountain tops are dangerous to drive because it has fairly unstable roads with a lot of small stones. You might notice these harmnesses before you go.
If it is available, I want to go camping with you this summer. As I mentioned, the summer weather is the best time for trip and I personally like camping because I go to enjoy it every summer. If you allow me to come with you, I really appreciate it.
Hope you reply this letter with the good words.
Best regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 274, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...amp. I assuem that you might enjoy your summer time here involving the mother nature of my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, really, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55785123967 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4456422273 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566115702479 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4724019574 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8461538462 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268569733201 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857914462487 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663120872851 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157015963726 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641889979371 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.