Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. What are the causes and give your solutions?
It is often argued that the attitude is necessary to be being a nice person in our society. Some people might think that the number of youths seems to have not sufficient manners comparing to the previous times. This essay will address to suggest the problems and solutions in terms of this current issue.
First of all, the exposure of mess media and low level of education might affect children these days. To put it another way, the majority of social networks indicates that repecting others are not fun and cool because they tend to show that it is too outdated. For example, most of young celerities may think that making new trends such as being rude are the best, so many pupils might follow them because they are the idol of youths. Moreover, the level of education is also too low to improve individuals' attitude to be more respectful because many children do not prefer to be educated to be part of kind neighbours. Thus, the group of them nowadays might not show good manners.
On the other hand, there are some methods to resolve this phenomenon. The government should implement the policy to reinforce any sorts of programmes which may influence young people's behaviour such as social media. For instance, all influencers have to take responsibilites what they do due to leading of trends. Furthermore, teachers would teach them about being polite and respectful to other people in school because the class is the clear way to grow the manner up. Therefore, these kinds of solutions may give them the better results.
In conclusion, in spite of the fact that many obstacles harm pupils' behaviour more than before, there are some resolutions can be seen positive to erase. The number of adults needs to encourage youths to enhance their attitude.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the young') or simply say ''most young''.
Suggestion: most of the young; most young
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8642384106 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50230585297 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4044002004 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197637719988 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546782734465 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432550848711 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10531271605 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046209394921 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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