A local college wants people with a job to come and talk to students about what it is like to work. You would like to come forward and talk to the students about your job.
Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter,
• explain what you would like to talk about
• say why students would be interested in your job
• suggest a possible date and time for the talk
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is John Smith, the senior customer manager of Digikala corporation, and I am writing this letter with regard to giving a talk to would-be new job seekers of your college students.
Firstly, I would like to take this opportunity to describe the shift from student life to work life in conjunction with a few life-changing decisions that I made immediately after graduation. How to find the best job prospects is my second main topic that I tend to discuss.
As a matter of fact, my speech will pique most students’ interests as some ideas, such as the most straightforward ways of increasing your chances of being hired after college, and how to get accustomed to job atmosphere and how to adopt official manners at workplace, are being delivered.
Finally, in terms of the schedule of the symposium, I would recommend the second half of December as the final examinations of students are over. My own preference is December 25th in the afternoon. I am sure these future employees will love the material and capitalize on the given advice the most. please contact me via email about the exact date and time of the seminar.
I am looking forward to hearing from you,
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to jobbing'.
Suggestion: accustomed to jobbing
...ing hired after college, and how to get accustomed to job atmosphere and how to adopt official ma...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...apitalize on the given advice the most. please contact me via email about the exact da...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, so, such as, as a matter of fact, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82547169811 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82153945669 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646226415094 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6391694205 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 4.34317383033 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242428038826 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758225613772 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640702671885 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115561983902 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616509187967 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to jobbing'.
Suggestion: accustomed to jobbing
...ing hired after college, and how to get accustomed to job atmosphere and how to adopt official ma...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...apitalize on the given advice the most. please contact me via email about the exact da...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, so, such as, as a matter of fact, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82547169811 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82153945669 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646226415094 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6391694205 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 4.34317383033 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242428038826 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758225613772 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640702671885 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115561983902 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616509187967 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.